Jules the jester

Please Do critique my writing and tell me exactly what you think Prologue The castle came alive as fire rained down upon it. Three dragons circled the sky above spitting ...

After all your last kind Critiques i decided to completly revise my Prologue. Prologue In the beginning the land, and the inhabitants, were ruled over by a godlike race of ...

Prologue The group of mounted warriors stopped at the top of the hill. Below them spread out was a large village. A young fresh faced warrior nudged his horse forward ...

This is a snippet from a set of stories which is called The Trolls World ******************************************************** The troll let out a horrendous scream and lashed out. The hunters drop

One naughty word Well a few weeks ago i spent the night awake and wrote this. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- The tavern was full of labourers who had jus

This is my first attempt at any writing that is not Fantasy. I have decided i need a change in writing. All comments and critiques welcomed. ******************************************************** Jo

This is the second part of my new story. Still searching for a title. All crits welcome once again. One bad word. sorry ************************************* Nikki’s dad was a short, pot ...

Still searching for a Title. I think i have Title block. Anyway as usual all crits very welcome. ************************************** The alarm clock beeped telling all within the vicinity to get ...

So it is exams and i needed something light hearted to write and relax So here it is. Enjoi. ************************************************************ The street was full of people running to and f

Sorry about the wait To teh peopel who have been Nagging me, You knwo who you are. Anyway I defeated Writers Block!! ************************************************ Jon sat on his sofa. The clock ...

Strangely Part four dissappeared from the forums. So i have had to put it back up. Anyway enjoy ************************************************** Jon sat in the passenger seat of his dads Jag. ‘Hur

This began as a short stroy for my friend. Plus i have never really read any fantasy stories were a black man was teh main character and i thought it ...

Due to an unfortunate event in which i lost so much work i decided to start a new story. ******************************* The man walked down the street slowly, villagers avoided him ...

Ah well this is the second part of my story. Enjoy. ******************************** The arrow flew straight and true, it entered the running mans neck throwing him to the ground killing ...